Light Calls | Curse Breaker: Enchanted
Once out on the balcony proper, the sunlight teased Sarn. Light called to light and the internal glow held in check by his flimsy eyelids wanted out–now. The fresh, clean scent of the River Nirthal greeted him. No one occupied the balcony, so claimed his sixth sense.
He opened his eyes as green light washed over the balcony. It brightened as the red orb of the sun finished crowning Mount Crael in the distance and started to slide behind its peak. That hated green glow muted every other color. It even washed the blues of out of the sky and turned the oranges to brown.
Read the rest in Curse Breaker: Enchanted today:
After an enchanted tree abducts Sarn, he’s thrust into a mystery revolving around a double homicide. Can Sarn protect his son, keep his masters happy and help the dead boy haunting him?
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You pay so much attention to details that the reader can virtually paint the vivid imagery in their minds 🙂
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As a non-magical human being, I was left in great excitement to read about the throes of magic! Loved it!
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Thank you! The magic in my book is pretty much its own character. So you’ll see lots of it. Everything Sarn does triggers it. 😀
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Wow, Mel! This is indeed another awesome and exciting journey with Sarn! I loved how you inserted descriptions about Shayari. I admire how you clearly imagined it to be and how eloquently you passed those details to us, your readers. ❤
What’s next!!! 😀
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Thank you! I have had a long time to imagine it.
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But it was well worth the time. 🙂
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yes it was 🙂
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It’s a yes for me, too! Because your points are definite, your descriptions are exact and vivid. You’ve truly created a spot-on Shayari and detailed characters with their own specific personality. It’s amazing! 😀 You’re amazing!
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Thank you! That was my hope that I had created such a place and people to capture readers’ imaginations
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You just did that! You’re hardwork clearly paid off! 🙂
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thank you 🙂
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You’re always welcome! 😀
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Your descriptions are really evocative. I feel like I can see everything. I’m going to forward this to my son too. 🙂
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Thank you! I’m working on publishing this one too. I just need to write the last few chapters
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That’s great!
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Thank you 🙂 It was my sister’s last request; she told me to finish Sarn’s story and publish it.
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Awww. Now that can’t be ignored, huh? God bless you!
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Thank you and yes that can’t be ignored. 😉
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I love your writing, Melinda – so fresh and descriptive. I really wish I could spend time reading it as closely as I would like. Wonderful, my friend!
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Thank you! I’m honored that you devoted some of your free time to read it
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You are welcome, my friend.
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