Beloved*
A collaboration with Carol from WritersDream9.Wordpress.com
Carol is a skilled poet who excels at crafting haikus, haibuns and tankas that read like a Japanese master penned them. She also creates short fiction, longer poems and haigas of breath-stealing breadth and beauty.
She has set her sights on a form I know and love: the sonnet. Together she and I have woven a sonnet about those nearest to our hearts but farthest from our sides.
Beloved
An incomplete life, one rife with endings,
Promises broken, days that are not spent
Leaving relatives broken and lending
Ears to listen for her voice from heav’n sent
Taken from the world all too soon in time
Grief is all that is there to fill her place
Sometimes there is no clear reason or rhyme
How I wish we could see her precious face
But I know she waits at heav’n’s pearly gates
Her hand waiting to enfold mine and lead
Me to paradise where endings create
New beginnings for new lives that are freed
Her soul’s powerful love is now increased
My guide, angel, solace~without surcease
~ ❤ ~
Collaborating on a sonnet was a lot of fun. I was getting tired of the form because I have written so many in the last three or four months but this collaboration made me recall why I love the form so much.
Thank you Carol for making the sonnet my beloved form again.
~ ❤ ~
This poem is dedicated to all those we have loved, lost and hope are waiting on the other side; whatever you believe that other side to be.
~ ❤ ~
This is hauntingly beautiful. The evocative grief is so deep and I get the feel you that you had your sister particularly in mind as you wrote this.
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I did–for my parts–how did you know? Thank you!
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Great write. Bravo to you both 👏👏👏
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Thank you 🙂
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This was such a beautiful read! I loved the carefully chosen words and the poignant sentiments!
~ Dajena 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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You are welcome!
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😀
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What a wonderful collaboration!
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Thank you! 🙂
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My pleasure.
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But I know she waits at heav’n’s pearly gates
Her hand waiting to enfold mine and lead
Such gorgeous lines ❤ ❤
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Thank you! 🙂
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❤
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Simply Beautiful……Hugs!
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Thank you! Hugs to you too!
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Hope despite loss, a beautiful sonnet and excellent collaboration. Well done ladies, this is a special poem 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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🙂
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Oh this is a lovely heart-grabber–beautiful collaboration!
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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😀
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Oh.. this heartwarming sonnet touches the soul within. It can recall grief created by death yet the final lines give a much coveted feeling of peace,
I haven’t written a sonnet, yet, and I am still intimidated by, it. Nonetheless, this poem make me adore it more. 🙂
Great job, as expected, you two! ❤
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Thank you! We could collaborate on a sonnet if you want.
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Oh. Haha! I am not sure I can? 😀
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They’re not that hard. They just take a little planning
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But… I am afraid of them. 😀
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no don’t fear them! They can be quite fun!
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Okaaay. 🙂 I read about them… and the iambic pentameter makes my nose bleed. I don’t know what are those! -_-
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I just make sure there are 10 syllables in each line and that the rhyme is right. The iambic part either shows up our it doesn’t. I don’t worry about it
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Ohhh. Alright. I’ll take note of that! 😀
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😀 You can write a sonnet. I know can.
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Thank you for the vote of confidence my dear Mel!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Beautiful.. talks deeply of loss yet the hope of being reunited with the lost ones. A life bereft of that love yet replete with the hope of a chance at that love. The closing couplet seals my faith on the other side.
Wonderful collab, Mel and Carol.
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Thank you! You got at the core of the poem with your comment 🙂
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And I’m so glad about it 🙂
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😀 Now I need to use that black magic for something…hmmm….
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Oooh I’m excited!
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I guess I better go do something with that magic! 🙂
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The suspense is killing. Do whatever you need to, fast! 🙂
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