The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu: Sloth*
*A collaboration with Rosema from A Reading Writer
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The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu:
SLOTH
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Sun sets and rises,
I’m unmoved in unmade bed,
tomorrow, I’ll move.
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Get up, get moving–
ignore the couch, your enemy–
turn off the tv.
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To be continued tomorrow with another deadly sin and another senryu…
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Loving these, Mel! Damn you’re good 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 We might have had a little too much fun with this series 🙂
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It shows! Awesome stuff 🙂
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Thank you!
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Haha, this is brilliant and perhaps my favorite so far. This is so me, most of the time 🙂
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Oh wowza, this is good. Although I do make it out of bed (though I don’t make the bed), the couch and TV are my friends–so I can hardly ignore them 😉
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oh well in that case then you’re not slothful, your sociable! 😀 Thank you
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Hahahaha, thanks!
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You’re welcome. Glad we cleared up that essential point 🙂
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🙂
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Good….Caught in the Cleft of a Stick! 😉
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😀 Thank you! We might have had a little too much fun with this…
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Perhaps…. 😉 Hugs! ❤
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Hugs indeed!
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To Melinda Kucsera Life is more about being connected than to turn off the many tiresome things in the media world.
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you could be right about that. Since I can’t afford any tv stations at all, I can’t say either way. I get my news from the good ‘ol internet and word of mouth
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