Write on Water by Melinda Kucsera
Write on Water
My last breath–I write
a last request on water
erased by the tide
Scribbling on water
future written in ripples
fate rides wind-tossed waves
Underwater I–
grip my lifesaver, write help
then draw my escape
Sketched my fantasy
then drowned in its sensation,
swam immersed in dreams.
Walk on water smooth
sheet of glass etched by no words
nature holds the pen
Bubbles spell my doom
as I plummet, my pen held tight
flotation device?
I sink and pass fish
I click to expose the nib
no upwards motion.
Written on water
a scream bubble etched, tide-swirled
my last words stolen
Fish watch as I drown
their schools swim past wide-eyed
octopus lends ink
In the silt I lie
no breath left to cry, just die
my cold side tingles
Gills rip open–breathe
send air to collapsing lungs
lie still, equalize
Flex webbed fingers, toes
you weren’t human after all
float as you write on
Scribing stories with
octopus ink underneath
lake’s placid mirror
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Impressive
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Thank you 🙂
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How are you?
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I’m doing OK. Just thriving at the moment. I come on to read once in a while and have written some stuff and will put them up later. How are you doing?
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I’m stressed but getting along as best I can with this juggling act we call life. I’m glad to hear you’re thriving. I’ll get there. Curse Breaker: Enchanted publishes on 9/27. Then I market it and edit the sequel. The road will bend eventually and present a smoother way. I wish it would hurry up. All this striving is tiring! Thank you for asking and stopping by. 😊 You’re always welcome.
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Wow. This is absolutely powerful. How did I miss it? I love it. So well written and the imagery created is quite lovely that I don’t know which stanza I like most.
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Thank you 🙂 I am glad you like it. It kind of took on a life of its own but it was a fun write and that is one great image.
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Oh dear Mel. Writing on water has never been this beautiful. I love this so much… but yes I miss them. You know who they are. 😀 😀 😀
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Thank you 🙂 I’m surprised at how this one turned out. It just kept flowing.
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Wow! Those words are unstoppable!
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Thank you! Words are unstoppable sometimes
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I agree! 😀
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😀
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This is a really interesting poem. Loved the idea of writing with Octopus ink. Keep writing no matter what!
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Thank you! That was the general idea! Write no matter the obstacles 😉
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Wowza, this is Fabulosa!!!
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Thank you!
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Most welcome 🙂
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😀
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Yes! Writing your last words on water to live on after you as ripples wind blown, trying to stay afloat…powerful and fitting imagery Melinda, all captured in beautiful form. I enjoy your writing so much, my friend 🙂
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Thank you! I enjoy your writing too. I’m grateful the prompt featured such a powerful image.
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Extremely interesting poem. First the writing on water and trying to float and stay above not drown. Then thinking you’ll drown but developing gills, ” not human” like an “octopus.” But you’re still writing. Your poem speaks to me about transformation and being adaptive in certain situations. Maybe being able to write and have that ability, no matter the circumstance. Also, as a person in a difficult situation, adapting to your surroundings and your writing transforming because of it. Great job!
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Thank you! That’s exactly what what was going through my head! I’m glad you got it all 🙂
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I must say this was really beautiful!
Really great ! I fell in love with this! _
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Thank you 🙂
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Your work stands so beautifully all by itself! This is so beautiful and tender!
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Thank you! I hope you had a good weekend
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You’re welcome. Are we going to collab anymore or is that done? 🙂
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I’d love to collab again. I’m not sure if I can do it today though. All the big wigs who were out last week are in today. So I’ve got some work to do for them and all those meetings that were pushed off from last week still need to be rescheduled. I should know by day’s end how the week will go and I can let you know then. But yes I’d love to continue collabing!
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Great! Just let me know! 🙂
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I will 🙂
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Excellent, Melinda! Superlative image…..Easter Blessings flow your way. Hugs! ❤
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Thank you! May Easter blessings for your way too!
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Beautiful. I have read many good collaorations in which you participated, so I am grateful to e ale to taste your own personal work. I love this. There are several stanzas that are so strong with imagery. Good work.
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Thank you 🙂 more original stuff to come.
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You promise???
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yes the collabs were something new I was trying
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You do it well.
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Thank you!
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