Landing – A Micro story

Gravity seized our dead ship.

Impact in five …

Safety gel oozed out of dispensers.

three …

We’re immobilized by goo.

one …

Who knew we’d end up conjoined?

10 thoughts on “Landing – A Micro story”

Joy Pixley says:

September 11, 2016 at 8:27 pm

Nice tension with the countdown, and yuck, what a nasty twist ending!

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1. Melinda Kucsera says:
  
  September 11, 2016 at 11:14 pm
  
  Thank you 🙂 It was the first thing that popped into my actually 🙂
  
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c2avilez says:

September 11, 2016 at 11:12 am

If it’s not one thing it’s another. Haha. Good one.

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1. Melinda Kucsera says:
  
  September 11, 2016 at 6:59 pm
  
  Yes! Omg yes! Thank you😁
  
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thelonelyauthorblog says:

September 9, 2016 at 1:22 pm

Excellent work. You added tension to this little write.

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1. Melinda Kucsera says:
  
  September 9, 2016 at 2:40 pm
  
  Thank you 😁
  
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Bushka says:

September 9, 2016 at 11:06 am

Captivated! Hugs. ❤️

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1. Melinda Kucsera says:
  
  September 9, 2016 at 11:27 am
  
  🙂 Thank you!
  
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jademwong says:

September 9, 2016 at 10:00 am

Love the countdown! Clever. And eeep being conjoined sounds like a nightmare X_X

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1. Melinda Kucsera says:
  
  September 9, 2016 at 10:04 am
  
  hey they did survive the landing… maybe there’s some industrial strength solvent lying around? 😉
  
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