The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu: Gluttony*
*A collaboration with Rosema from A Reading Writer
Rosema writes short fiction, poems and posts about the books she’s reading.
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The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu:
GLUTTONY
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Calories unseen,
six sumptuous slices still
not enough, more please!
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Counting calories–
Eat more lettuce not more cake.
Lock the cookies up!
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To be continued tomorrow with another deadly sin and another senryu…
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Eat more lettuce, become a rabbit 🙂 Love these, so much. Great collaboration, you two! It seems I have become a glutton for your words 🙂
😀 thank you! Best compliment ever
You are welcome, my friend 😀 😀
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This is quite fabulous–and guilt-inducing, hah!
It’s almost midnight here and I’m hungry just reading your senryu 😀 Great collab! Can’t wait to read the rest of ’em!!
Thank you! 🙂 we’ve got ’em all coming one a day 🙂 Yeah that one is making me hungry too!
You’re welcome! Oh and I just left a message on Hangouts 🙂
I got it 🙂
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You have balanced so perfectly again!
Thank you! that was our aim 🙂
You got it!
😀 Yay!