Veterans
Beneath the poppies they lie, our fallen
protectors, who gave their lives to stop foes
from near and far from taking God-given
rights to life and liberty. In the throes
of battle they never failed to take down
the enemy, ’till snicker-snack, their match
met, one unlucky sword thrust took them down.
Up they got to fight ’till a bullet catch–
then to earth they went, eternal sleep bent.
Their eyes close on this churned up battlefield,
then open on a field of poppies meant
to greet their tired souls. Red flowers reveal
their memory honored by those they saved,
their struggle ends now in the peace they craved.
Prompt courtesy of Magpie Tales
Oh, my, I do hope so: “their struggle ends now in the peace they craved.” Nicely done.
Thank you 🙂 It is my hope that they are at peace.
Awesome work for the prompt girl! How are you? I have been pretty much offline but things have settled down a bit so enjoying the quiet. So happy to see your link, nice to see you! Hugs!
Hello Bekkie, thank you for your kind words. I’m doing well. I’m glad to read that things have settled down for you. Have a good one!
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Will do, you do the same!
I can’t find your website on my list of blogs I follow. I still don’t have the hang of WP all the way.
I wanted to ask you what happened to Jinshu? I finally stopped following because there were no prompts and I couldn’t get an answer.
Curious…hugs!
Yeah I’ve been wondering that too. I wonder if an email might help shine some light on that. I hope he’s okay. He’s probably just busy.
He’s only 10 isn’t he? He’s probably busy with school.
I thought he was a teenager but yes, he’s probably busy with school
No, he’s 10 years old I read some of his blog. Today is Mag already!! See you there? Hugs!
I’ll check it out in a bit thanks for the reminder
Not thrilled with the prompt this week you may not be either. Hugs!
yeah I’m not feeling inspired by it
I ended up doing a haiku anyway about a kitchen cat. Have a good week Melinda!
You too!
Either that or they are feeling really gipped right now
For these heroes, we should remember much more often than we do. Beautiful expression to touch the soul. Thanks for sharing the words.
Thank you and you’re right. 🙂
Absolutely beautiful….thank you for sharing this, Melinda…
You’re welcome 🙂
Brilliance
Thank you 🙂
I wonder if you realize that your sonnet gave a summary of a World War I battle: soldiers show up, the weaker/fated to go one dies, some people feel safer, poppy grows to sort of commemorate the fallen and the end. Cool :). As always Melinda your writing is engaging.
Thank you. I read up about the connection between poppies and veterans before I wrote it and discovered the WWI connection. I wanted to be true to its roots. I have several veteran ancestors that I hope are reading it with pleasure from heaven. (Assuming they have wifi and laptops up there)
hehe @ wifi up in heaven. I suppose they have something even better. I remember when I first read about the poppie and WWI, on a research site moons ago and I thought it beautiful. When I was at school we wore the paper ones, the school still do for the whole of November.
I hope they do have wifi. I love my internet. 😉 My mom always bought the poppies from the veterans but I never understood the connection. I think they ought to teach about this in school because it’s a beautiful thing and there’s a beautiful poem expressing it on the VFW website.
I think some schools do at least some in my homeland. I love me some internet as well, I think I am too addicted. haha.
same here. Though wordpress has been encroaching on my google mania…
Good one! For a different slant on a war sonnet, please see my post about Wilfred Owen’s work at clydelongpoetry.
Ok will do