Elemental Senryu*
*A collaboration with Rosema from A Reading Writer
Rosema writes short fiction, poems and posts about the books she’s reading.
Hop on over to check out her site and pick up a recommendation or two for your next read.
Earth
Above sprouts green lawns,
beneath lies decaying bones,
births, buries life zones.
Cities rise and fall
Earth remains spinning through all
the lives led and lost.
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To be continued tomorrow …
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Love these elemental senryu.. beautiful collabs π
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Thank you π
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You are welcome π
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Amazing!! Like I told your other “accomplice in crime” these are turning out to be just gorgeous
collabs!
β€ Dajena
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Thank you! We worked hard on them. I’m honored that she asked me π
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Lovely!!
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Yes it was π
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Great!
The first one is Rose’s, and the second one is yours. Right?
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Yes it is. How’d you guess?
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Something about the sentence structure, the grammar, the imagery …
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I’d wondered if my work was as obvious to others as it is to me π
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It is obvious to me.
You have a distinct style and voice. It’s the mark of a true writer.
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Thank you π I’ve worked hard to get both
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A beautiful poem!
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Thank you π
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Very lovely work.
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Thank you π
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Fantastic job, you two! π
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome
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Great and unified work! π
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Thank you!
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Welcome, my friend!
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π there’s three more in the series π
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Yay!
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We did all four elements. They’ll go live one a day π
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