The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu: Wrath*
*A collaboration with Rosema from A Reading Writer
Rosema writes short fiction, poems and posts about the books she’s reading.
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The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu:
WRATH
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Gun locked and loaded.
Chamber a round, set my sights–
unload bullet’s wrath.
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Blood pours from killed foe
does it bring equal justice,
or your mind’s own peace?
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To be continued tomorrow with another deadly sin and another senryu…
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Yeah, my money is on the first stanza being yours.
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How did you know?
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Smiling. The similarity with your other badassery post. You do write so well.
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Thank you I try
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Right on and brava!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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😀
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Brilliant! Love it, Mel. Bring on number two, clever poets 🙂
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Thank you! Tomorrow is Envy and then Pride. 🙂
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Can’t wait! So clever 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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I knew the first one was yours 🙂 You two are so not when you are wrathful! 🙂
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Let me guess – the first stanza is yours? 😀 Great collab!!
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yes how did you know?
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😀 I’m starting to know your writing style especially since I’ve seen your words appear on my screen in the process 🙂
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