The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu: Wrath*
*A collaboration with Rosema from A Reading Writer
Rosema writes short fiction, poems and posts about the books she’s reading.
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The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu:
WRATH
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Gun locked and loaded.
Chamber a round, set my sights–
unload bullet’s wrath.
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Blood pours from killed foe
does it bring equal justice,
or your mind’s own peace?
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To be continued tomorrow with another deadly sin and another senryu…
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Yeah, my money is on the first stanza being yours.
How did you know?
Smiling. The similarity with your other badassery post. You do write so well.
Thank you I try
Right on and brava!
Thank you!
You’re welcome!
😀
Brilliant! Love it, Mel. Bring on number two, clever poets 🙂
Thank you! Tomorrow is Envy and then Pride. 🙂
Can’t wait! So clever 🙂
Thank you 🙂
I knew the first one was yours 🙂 You two are so not when you are wrathful! 🙂
Let me guess – the first stanza is yours? 😀 Great collab!!
yes how did you know?
😀 I’m starting to know your writing style especially since I’ve seen your words appear on my screen in the process 🙂