Rebirth*
*A collaboration with Rosema from A Reading Writer
Rosema writes short fiction, inspiring poems and posts about the books she’s reading.
Hop on over to check out her site and pick up a recommendation or two for your next read or check out Maria of Doodles and Scribbles‘ and Rosema of A Reading Writer‘s Word High July Filipino Words writing prompts and get your creative juices flowing!
Rebirth
Through bright light I rise
Endless night I leave behind
From a corpse set free
Body lays frozen
As warm soul flies, awaken
Is my lifeโs taken?
Into light divine
The source of life I see
Death is a doorway
Feet leads to stairway
Towards the place for the dead,
Also for rebirth.
Mounting the risers
I ascend towards heaven
Its pearl gates call me
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A Renkay is a shorter American variation of the Renga. It fosters developmental linking in which the poets move the poem through a theme. It allows for linking of previously written haiku, unlike the renga’s spontaneity.
A Renkay is:
- usually communal, written by more than one poet. (It can also be written by just one poet.) The change of poet can either be indicated by initials to the side of the stanza or in this day of computers, by italics or change of font.
- stanzaic, 5 linked tercets.
- syllabic, each stanza is 17 syllables or less, usually written in 3 lines of short-long-short pattern of the haiku, sort of.
- composed around a common theme and often composed with a senyru as the final stanza.
Great work ladies. Loved it.
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Thank you for another great collab my dear Mel!
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Thank you for inviting me! ๐
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the form wants a duet, and of course it’s your name that always pops up in my mind when it comes to collab! ๐
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Fabulous, both of you! โค๏ธ
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