Silakbo/Fireproof
And she stood there among the ruins, a brand in hand, watching the pyre consume her past. Smoke obscured her future. She regarded the wands she’d tossed but their pattern was inconclusive. For the first time in ten years, she couldn’t riffle through tomorrow’s pages and read its headlines.
She exhaled the breath she’d been holding and collapsed onto a boulder, weeping with relief. Burning down the house on the hill had freed her from the curse of second sight. Wiping tears of relief from her eyes, she laughed at the murder of crows drawn to the charred ruins further down the slope and the leathery bodies of her enemies which refused to burn. Who knew that demons were fireproof?
Thank you @PoetryByDamon for the perfect opening line. It begged for a story. Check out Midnight Angel’s tweets for more beautiful lines. You’re sure to be inspired.
Thank you Maria of Doodles and Scribbles and Rosema of A Reading Writer for Word High July #FilipinoWords #Prompt.
Got a great line begging for a tale? Drop it into the comments below or tweet it to @MelindaKucsera and you could be featured in the future.
woooow, Mel!!! This is epic! Vivid! So intense! Bravo!!
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Thank you, it just wanted to be epic. Who am I to oppose it? π
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yeah! surely this one is epic!
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π very likely it is! I’ll have to see what happens.
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geeez! π am excited!
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Wonderfully done, Mel! As always! I suddenly fear those fireproof demons. cringe
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Thank you π this piece was fun to write π
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And we enjoyed it- a lot! Hope to read more of this π
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I’m working on some more scenes π
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very vivid!
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Very neat story, I want to know more. Learn about why the house gave her this second sight, and why she’s fighting fireproof demons. Excellent!
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Sure I’ll give it a think and whip up some more for august π thanks for the idea!
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This is intriguing….the vivid description is excellent
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Thank you! π
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this is wonderful!
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Thank you π
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Excellent…..I’m sure YOU are not given to ‘silakbo’…; Hugs!
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I hope not! Thank you π
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π Hugs! β€
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