(continues from The Trouble with White)
I stepped aside, and the train plastered my transparent body to the tunnel. Despite my resolve to stay on this side of the Hudson, the wind generated by the train’s passage tried to suck me along after it.
I scrabbled for a hold until my fingers slid along a pipe. Gripping it, I clung on for dear afterlife right at the point where land and water meet outside the tunnel. My consciousness stretched and thinned at the end of my spiritual tether. Just before I broke apart in screaming agony, the train finally left me behind. Physics let go its death grip, and I dropped onto the tracks. Clawing my way back up the tunnel, I belly crawled until I had some slack in my tether and I stopped feeling its presence.
I heard nature calling, singing, warning
me and its voice echoed where I did cling.
I’m dangling, zinging from electric stings.
All because Nature’s calling and I cringe.
My consciousness stretched and thinned at the end of my spiritual tether. Just before I broke apart in screaming agony, the train finally left me behind. Physics let go its death grip, and I dropped onto the tracks. Clawing my way back up the tunnel, I belly crawled until I had some slack in my tether and I stopped feeling its presence.
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Love the change in format. Definitely a good choice to experiment. And I feel kinda bad for him. You’d think as a ghost, he wouldn’t have to feel so much pain anymore sigh 😦
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Thank you. The poem just didn’t fit anywhere else. True though maybe this is his crucible.
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Nice poetry, I like it very much slipped in the middle. I didn’t realize as a ‘spiritual being’ he could feel so much pain. That’s supposed to be a good part of being a ghost or like one.
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Thank you! Maybe he was modified. He is here to do a job 😉 and likely to learn something
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