She watched the carnival of souls parade past wearing ghastly masks. Or were those their real faces captured in the act of taking their last gasping breath? She tossed an apple into the air; its red skin contrasted with the tattered gray of the souls processing past. Then she saw him and butterflies erupted from their cocoons in her stomach. Their fluttering wings made her pause.
He wore no mask; his smooth features had been carved out of the blushing stone of the desert. White strokes outlined the curve of wings that were a divine gift and he wore them well but not proudly. No never that, her angel who shined with a light so pure it hurt her eyes and stabbed her heart.
He turned his head in her direction and redemption’s price glittered in his eyes. And it was more than she, a remnant of a fallen pantheon, could pay. So she turned away and her body melted from all woman to half snake from the waist down. Those butterflies died in her belly as he walked on, holding the keys to that pearlescent gate–one she could never cross. And she slithered away, her green and black scales shining in the elysian light that she had to turn from and follow the river Acheron home.
Thanks @MadQueenStorm for the prompt. This is my #MadVerse and my first submission to Maria of Doodles and Scribbles and Rosema of A Reading Writer‘s Word High July #FilipinoWords #Prompt. Thank you Rosema & Maria! Sorry it got so dark. My imagination wandered off. I blame cold meds for this.
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Storm ☽✪☾ (@MadQueenStorm) June 28, 2016
Beautiful tale, until you realize they cannot be together.
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Yes though maybe it will lead her to someone better?
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Yes you are right π
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π Just call me the devil’s advocate!
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Lol. π
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Wonderful!
Love to hear more!
Myra
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Thank you I’ll see what the c characters are doing and work in a sequel
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Perfect…I know what you mean… π
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They never do what i want them to do. Oh well that’s what makes writing fun
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Really! I can’t wait to wake up to see what will happen next! Are they not wonderful!!!
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Yes and vexing because sometimes i need them to do certain things to make the plot work π
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Don’t we know it! Plop goes the plot>>>>+
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Hell yeah. My main keeps throwing the curve balls at me.
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Loved this dark write. Bravo.
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Thank you it took surprising twists
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Yes. You should do more of these.
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Hugs! β€
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Oh wow! This made me want to read moreeeeee!! Great story Mel, so perfectly told. β€
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Thank you I’ll see what i can do about that
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Dark and mysterious! Fantastic π
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Thank you you have a good one too
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Thanks π
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oooooooh. wow. this surely clenches the heart, Mel! You had me at the beginning and till the end. β€ It’s an almost love, a forbidden one.
Lovely! β€ β€ β€
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Thank you
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wow, a dark kilig! I like it π
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Thank you π
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