
Light the Tree
(Picks up where Seconds left off)
Sarn watched his son hang button hearts on boughs.
Assembledย from fallen branches, itย stood
e’en with Sarn’s head, those once enchanted boughs.
Still some magic left in their dying wood.
Sparks of green winked in its needles and bark.
Still aย collection of dead things arranged
and decorated with symbols, no part
for him in this thing that was prearranged.
“It should glow,” Ran said, hanging the last heart.
“It can’t because the branches are dying.
Not enough magicย left to do its part.”
Sarn shrugged; Ran didn’t find that satisfying.
Neither did Sarn and the Advent wreath mocked
him with its brightย glow, where two crystals docked.
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‘Tisย the season of light and the tree lacked
lightย and that was a problemย he could fix.
“Come on, I’ve an idea.” Sarn ransacked
his store of lumir, and withย a few tricks,
his magic forced them to cleave into beads.
Ran saw the beads and rushed to find some string.
He madeย a garland from the bright stone beads.
When Sarn judged it enough, they draped that string
about the tree from top to bottom and glow
it did, giving the Christmas tree some cheer.
Still something was missing despite its glow.
Sarnย looked to Ranย who shrugged but the need was clear–
Something to crown the tree and make it special.
It had to be something consequential.
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The Christmas tree wasย incomplete though fair.
They sat, father and son, in the tree’s glow.
“It needs a star,” Nerule pointed, “right there.”
“Make a star, Papa,” Ran noddedย ensnared
by the idea; a spare stone Sarn displayed,
a whitish crystal on his palm. Spiking
his magic, he madeย it extrude six rays
until they formed pointsย thatย wereย sparkling.
Holding up the finished star, his magic
forcedย itย to shift colors and throw rainbows.
Sarn liftedย Ran,ย whoย crownedย with a magic
star, the Christmas tree, and light laced itsย boughs.
They basked in its gloriousย light as the sight
gladdened their hearts for all the season’s nights.
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May it gladden your heart as you deck your tree.
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The story continues in A Fool for Christmas.
This is #8ย in a series of Advent posts starring Sarn, his son and the foster family theyย live with (Nolo, Inari and Nerule). You can check them all out on myย Holiday page in order.
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Inspired by Advent and aย Pic and a Word Challenge #14: Lightย and Poetry 101 Rehab: Magic.
I’ve really started to enjoy your writing. Very unique. It reaches to a wide audience. I liked this one very much. I think I will read it to my kiddos for bedtime beside our tree. Thanks for sharing!
You’re welcome. I just posted another addition to this story.
Will read!
Thank you ๐ You can find all the holiday vignettes on my holiday page in order: http://melindakucsera.com/poetic-holidays/
A journey full of superb colors and beautiful movements. I loved it!
Thank you!
You are welcome!!
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I finally have a moment to enter the fantasy world! And what a delight it is! ๐
Thank you ๐ I’m working on a retelling of Christmas staple. Should be up tomorrow ๐
Ooh I am very excited to readโบ๏ธ
Thank you ๐ I’ll be tomorrow morning. I need to give it one more read through.
No worries! I’ll make sure to check in the morning! I have been incredibly lazy for the past couple of days! Time to come out of the funk!
Sometimes it’s good to be lazy. Tomorrow I got to be on point. Short work day followed by a corporate “black and white ball.” Hoping this year’s holiday party is fun.
Ooo! You excited? Christmas parties are lovely!
I am trying not to dread the whole thing. I am always so out of place at these things
I love Christmas parties! I host one almost every year! I am one of those people who immediately start the countdown to next Christmas after one has passed! ๐ Just enjoyed yourself and don’t worry about the surroundings! ๐
I intend to try and have a good time. ๐
you must! I’ll be perched on your shoulder as the annoying Christmas spirit!
That would be cool because then I’d have someone to talk to! ๐
Done!
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Reading your works is like entering Narnia ๐
Thank you! I’ve always thought so but since I wrote them, I thought was biased on their behalf! ๐
๐ No, your characters are worthy of being immortalized on a silver screen.
Thank you! Maybe someday. Right now I’d just like to get the book on sale somewhere
I wish all the luck and I will buy a copy.
Thank you ๐
Wow! Tjo ๐
Thank you ๐ It’s drawn from my fantasy book and recast into a poem.
Beautiful imagery and another aptly written piece for the season.
Thank you! It’s a journey and a struggle this Christmas season but one I am enjoying writing and sharing. I am finding new meaning in everything and that is making it all new again. ๐
It’s a great thing about the things we write and rewrite: even in struggles we can find new ways to explore our ideas.
yes that is what makes it so enthralling and why I will never stop, even if the world stops reading. I will write on. ๐
Well-said…’I write for me’ and if the world gets to enjoy it, then that’s a bonus ๐
Yes because the reader can tell it was a labor of love or a matter of money. ๐
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Welcome ๐
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Reading it was a pleasure for sure. I felt warmed by the sparkling descriptions!
Thank you! ๐ I wrote it with all you guys in mind, a happy uptick in Sarn’s Christmas Journey.
Lovely and always my pleasure to read your work!
Thank you ๐
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All I can say is that you are a great inspiration to budding writers like me. I love the last stanza with the Christmas tree and those lovely rainbow lights that symbolizings the glow in the season. Beautiful, sparkling words here. ๐
Thank you ๐ It’s all drawn from my fantasy books and recast into a poem.
You’re welcome. That’s a distinct characteristics of a poet. ๐
really? that’s good to know. I like knowing I’m in good company. ๐
Sure you are in good company … On the contrary, I am the lucky one here to have you watch my back, lol. ๐
aw thank you ๐
You’re welcome!
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Just saw the typo error. Lol. Meant to write symbolizes… ๐
That’s ok I understood ๐