Threads of Grace
(& Other Senryu)
Threads of grace descend
golden they lace purple clouds
offer heaven’s hands
Wonder clears the soul
Pushes out wrongful thinking
deepens connections.
Witnesses did claim
brief but erotic sparks danced
on the empty bed.
Rare roots found to feed
endless supply of young trees
aliens left seeds.
News at eleven
speak to mayor ’bout crime wave
vigilantes wave.
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Words drawn from the Sunday Whirl’s Wordle # 245 & Six Word Wednesday.
Image credit: Pixabay
First two lines are my fav. So beautiful “laced” gives the poem and grace a feeling of delicacy. Great imagery.
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Thank you! It’s my fav too
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這真的太好了….謝謝你阿
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Excellent. That last stanza is fitting for these times. At least in NYC.
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Thank you 🙂 Though NYC is not experiencing any more crime than usual. No vigilante action either. Oh wait–was that a caped crusader running down the street? 😉
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Yes it is. There is a slashing epidemic going on in this city. People being slashed and stabbed FOR FUN. lol It’s not as bad as Chicago, but we are having serious problems. And the guy with the cape was a pizza delivery. lol
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I hadn’t heard about that. I’m just outside the City. Then again I work a lot and don’t have much time to do more than scan the headlines every so often.
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The icty has a rash of stabbing and slashing since January. Can’t wait to get out.
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Moving to the ‘burbs? (coming over to the dark side)
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Moving as far south as possible. Possibly Florida. Had it with winter too.
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Wow…you really do have an amazing way of writing
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Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you stopped by and enjoyed
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A fantastic string of Senryu!
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Thank you 🙂
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Delightful images…. 😉 Thanks, ‘Mel’….Hugs!
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Thank you and your welcome 🙂 Hugs too!
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I especially LOVE the first 3–wowza-wow!
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Thank you 🙂 that one is my fav too and the second one 🙂
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Yay 🙂
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I just love the opening lines in particular and all that follows. You couldn’t have done better justice to the image with the first two verses. And then bang! The way you close it with that sudden twist. Bravo!
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Thank you 🙂 I love wordles.
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So I see. You do it wonderfully. 🙂
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🙂 Thank you!
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You are always welcome 🙂
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the diversity of this poem make is awe-inducing. 🙂 Great dear!
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Thank you 🙂 I love wordles. I never know where they are going to lead me 🙂 this one went all over the place but it has a strange logic that works!
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Yes! A strange logic that is! 😀
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🙂 but it works
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It thrilled me!
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Thank you 🙂
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Your poetry always moves me – fantastic!
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Thank you! 🙂
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I aspire to work the wonderful ways of your words 🙂
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aw thank you, I had no idea you thought so highly of my work.
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I do — you are just such a prolific writer, I’m not able to read it all 😉
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Thank you 🙂 It’ll all be here when you have time 🙂 I understand about that, some people I follow are even more prolific than I am. I do the best I can but I can’t read all of their posts either. I just read what I can. 🙂
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