Are we Sundered Yet?

Thank you all.
While trying to fix the issues you raised, this image came together. What do you think? We did two versions–a close-up and a zoomed out.
What’s new? (Other than the pose and colors)
– rips in Sarn’s clothes and his face is dirty. My cloak is torn. We’re still considering how to dirty our clothes.
What do you think? We’re still tweaking the previous one but we’re having technical difficulties with it. My 3D double doesn’t want to cooperate in that one. I think we broke his shoulder. Melinda is researching a solution.
— Ran, son of Sarn, “chief taskmaster”

Version 1: 


Version 2: