Ride the Sun
Fireball in flight
chariot pulled by lions
riding high in sky
Lions beat their wings
they’re no hallucination
they’re chimera-bred
Gold armor clad him
molten where plates overlapped
the sun’s warrior
Champion of light
searching for armies of night
sword and lance ready
Land’s patchwork quilt slides
ruched where mountains interrupt
rivers snake and shine
Land dips, shaded vales
nooks in nature’s tablecloth
where evil can hide
Watch the different stars
hidden in sun’s direct light
visible to him
Watch for gateways made
in galaxy’s mosaic
amid dark matter
Await their coming
they’re vinyl and passionless
relics of the past
Isophilia
these newcomers from dead worlds
vanish if not caught
Leave their carcasses
to warn other space farers
this world is not yours
Mistakes cast shadows
leave scars on worlds that don’t heal
ruins of lives lost
Fly by a crash site
Broken ships disintegrate
still some traces left
Park the chariot
gold cloak billows as he walks
palm to cold plastic
Ancient words deny
no access for this lost soul
memories scald him
Not god-born golden
but star-fallen out of time
truth’s opia hurts
Who’s he to deny
safe harbor to new fallen
those earth ejected?
Sun kissed warrior
blessed by nature and new life
raised to light a path
Blaze until night comes
burn out the competition
not gods made but men
No quarter given
his pantheon must survive
aliens must die
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Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie “Wordle #103” & “Strength and Chariot” Writing Prompt for March 27.
WOW, powerful-good.
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Loved this and the referances again to Greek mythology – Helios or Apollo? But he is fighting newcomers, aliens who would hurt the earth and man. Love your creativity and your way of describing things. You really put feeling into your story telling. Excellent Melinda!
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Mistakes cast shadows, leave scars on worlds that donβt heal, ruins of lives lost. What a statement and so true too.
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A magical poem. Good work.
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Thank you π
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thanks so much for sharing your response to the prompt Melinda π
I noticed you’ve also incorporated some of the wordle words too – well done.
This is certainly an interesting interpretation of the prompt – and the cards …. it’s a wonderful combination of myth and fantasy, dosed with slivers of real life human experiences and emotions. You’ve combined it all to great effect.
Well done π
Pat
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Thank you π I saw the chariot card and then immediately, this fellow rocketed out of the card into my brain. π
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great job …. and some very wonderful lines …. ruched where mountains interrupt …. simply beautiful π
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Thank you! π
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I agree! This is epic and filled with mysticism! Love it!
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
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Have you been super busy? Just wanting clarification regarding collabs. Sorry to pester.
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Lots of meetings π¦ and that continues today. So far no meetings on tap for tomorrow. Wanna try for tomorrow or Friday?
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Yes! Thanks, Melinda!
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either day works? You’re welcome π keep your fingers crossed that no meetings are scheduled!
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Friday is best.
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Let’s try for Friday then π
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Mystifying, magical! Thank you for taking me to one epic ride!
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You’re welcome π
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Look at this poem! Awesome! I loved that part of: memories scalding – ouch! – so apt! A terrific ride! π
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Thank you π
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You are welcome! π
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